Wednesday, March 10, 2010

A Story

William the Special Agent


William was in his bed when his alarm clock rang. When he looked out his window he saw a rainbow, “A sign of a promise.” he muttered. He got dressed and ran down stairs. His mother had made pancakes as she did every morning, “Morning mom.” He yawned. “Good morning.” She said in a cheery voice. Then wiped her hands on her apron. “hurry up and eat son you’ll be late for school.” “Ok mom.” he said. as he stuffed a whole pancake in his mouth at once. Then he ran out the door and to the bus stop he waited and waited but the bus didn’t come all of the sudden a black mercades came spitting fire out of the exuast pipes that showed it was powerful. A man in a black suit came out and said, “federal agent, Come with me.” “No!” said William. Then the man in the black suit pulled out a gun and said, “Now!” William gave in and said reluctantly “OK-K-KAY.” and gulped. He climbed in and the car sped off. “that rainbow wasn’t much of a promise.” he muttered. When they got to their destonation. The man mumbled a few words to a guard and sped past the gate. They entered the building and it was dark it made him think of death. They went into a brighter room where they met a man in the exact same suit as the man who had threatened him. They each mumbled something to each other. And willam said, “Does EVERYONE mumble?!” the man they met said sarcastically, “Yes!” his face was white and barren as snow. that told me he wasn't a very nice guy.

2 comments:

Grammy said...

Hey,Gavin!
Looks like you have very good imagination! Keep up the good work and tell us what happens next.
Love,
Grammy

Becca's Dirt said...

Very creative Gavin. Is there a next part to the story?